What do you think of my poem? (it's kind of dark)?

-Her mind was an ocean

Devouring, slaughtering

And murdering in frenzy

Her life had been a maze

And she had never got out

They were lost at sea

Floating down to a dark abyss

The ones she had kept

Tucked under the bottom of her heart

Had no souls, nor eyes to see

And she fed them the emptiness inside her

So she could have more room

To greedily fill her pockets,

She would stuff them with bloodied cloth

As she mourned for herself

They would all rot

In the bottom of the sea.





would you buy a book with this type of writting in it?I like it !! I think its dark but it has a meaning behind it which is pretty much the whole point of poetry ... To have a good meaning ... Id bye it ! Its totally tim Burton (iluvhim!)
I rarely read poems for reading but your was dark, awesome and also castrated some fear in me.