I am writing a poem and I need to know if this line makes sense? (PLEASE ANSWER)?

-So I'm writing a poem in honor of my best friends niece who passed on today. She had Spina Bifida and didn't even reach age 1..

I just wanted to know if this part of the poem makes sense,

"Sing amongst the others"

It's talking about singing with the other angels.

I'm reading this poem tonight in her honor and I just wanted to make sure it made sense..

Thankyou to those that answer.

R.I.P Haylee.Condolences to you and your friend.



Who is singing?

Are they plural, like "souls who sing in harmony with the angels" or singular like "her souls sings with the voice of an angel".That is so sad - I'm sorry for your loss...

I think the line very much makes sense, both grammatically and in context, as long as you mention something about angels or heaven (or something along those lines) in the lines before. It sounds beautiful. I'm sure your poem will be great. Good luck!
Ehh well mabye you should put sing amongst the angeles cause "sing amongst the others" I would think who is others?
It depends on the previous lines. If you mentioned angels in the line before, it should make sense.



Sorry about your friend's niece.. :(
It is grammatically correct and indicates that one is with other people, singing.
not really but if you put sing amongst the others and singing with other angles mix together that might work.
yes I think it does make sence.
I think thats a beautiful way to word it :)

I'm sorry about your loss.



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