Unexpected End [New Poem]?

-Well, things never did get better between me and my friend...it inspired another depressing poem, though I just wrote this after literally 23 hours without sleep, so it's possible it's terrible :P .



Anyway, it's called Unexpected End, and it has kind of a 4-on-the-floor rhythm.

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Unexpected End



How can I help her when I can't even fix myself?

When I look into the mirror all I see is shame and doubt

I don't even know what's hap'ning when I look into her eyes

All the thoughts that I once knew so well now catch me by surprise

Thinkin' this and thinkin' that, am I the only one who knows

That it's lies and nothing more, and I'll repeat it blow-for-blow

See for four years we were friends, acquaintences I'd better say

Then six months we were just best friends 'til that cold November day

When I realized there was something more, stirring in my brain

Controlling every heartbeat, every wax and every wane

So I told you that one half-truth that we both now know so well

You reacted with such joy it felt like Heaven, now it's Hell

For one month we had some fun, tossed feelings back and forth

But then one day in February told you I felt more

Since then I haven't seen you, barely speak to you at all

You avoid me like the plague and yet you claim that nothing's wrong

I was there for you when times were tough, a friend when you're in need

Not a week later I spoke the truth and you went off on me

Now here we are, six months have passed since that February day

Yet still no talking though you know those feelings have gone away

I stay back because I know you're dispaired with me in your life

And you stay back saying "nothing's wrong" even through all the obvious strife

In just 2 months I'm leaving, won't be able to see you again

I guess when the unexpeceted comes, it's the Unexpected End.

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As always, comments and criticism are welcome as long as it's civil.



-IMP ;) :)Aww....so sad. :(
u should be a rap artist