Plz comment on my poem..?

-Mask man#

In the middle of the night

He entered the lonely house through window pane

I'm the thief i'm gonna loot

He said to himself,and checked the gun again.

No one's gonna see him he thought

As he was wearing a full face mask.

His green eyes were the only flashing thing

He smiled coz stealing is not a big task.



The mask man thinks he is the bad boy

Nothing's gonna stop him this night

Making his move without the light.



Then he entered a room gently pushing the door

And saw the big lamp in the corner still turned red

Mask man took a glimpse of the room

And found someone on the bed.

He took a step back then he hit the table

Glass doll fell and shattered he had to pay the price.

It made the girl to wake up

She stood in silence as she saw those green eyes.



The mask man doubts was he the bad boy

Is she gonna stop him in this night

As he moves towards from dark to light.



Mask man saw the girl and she was beautiful

He looked her again

Then he ran through the window pane.



Mask man found himself in the morning

Walking down the city street.

Mask was off his head but girl in his mind

Never seen a girl such a beauty n sweet.

Then he saw a girl walking down to him.

It was the same girl he saw before a while.

The girl saw those green eyes

She came close to him with a smilewow nice poem i like it.....what a great creation really