-She lived beside the waters edge, by grassy slopes and sand.聽She saw the sun and turned to run and took me by the hand.聽Forsake this earth she whispered near and I was glad to hear.聽For far from here, lives ne're a tear, just me and thee my dear.sounds like this could be a great chorus to a raspy singer's (like Adele or Mozella) song. Look up Mozella's "Life Is" and put that tune to these words......Great job. You could be a song writer! =)
Its like a song...I like it.
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