Would you collaborate in this poem?

-Lingering like wisps of cloud after a pouring rain,

tendrils of the images that come within a dream.

A stone wall throwing its shadow over a nesting crane,

a rictus of a face familiar yet warped by a scream.



Would you add your words to this to make it complete?No more imagination to make my world complete ,you know,

To stay or not to stay? Hell no i may never go.

A rictus is a word unbeknownst to thee,

Spellchecker says not a word,let it be.

In his abode his casket lay bare,

They stole him,no one cares.

bye
And in the air a midnight mare

who gallops past on silent hooves

above a fitful sleeper's head,

outracing both her moon and sun.
And so the three of us tend to sleep

Not in concrete forms of truth from studied literature

Or from a certain specific memory that makes us weep

But from within ourselves, our own caricature.
Hey Firecat, you can ask members in the Poetry Castle at http://www.fliprap.com to collaborate with you
This I wanna wanna do, I'll be back to.
This is great on it's own but i don't know what I would add...