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2011年8月4日星期四

What would yu do if I sent you this poem and we were friends?

-She WAS my friend and she's just to clingy.. I guess she didn't understand what it mean't; when she got the poem, she said. "Why won't you answer me?" Like really..? Okay, heres the poem.



I guess I see you, its about now.

Its awfully true, I wish I knew how.



You see me leave, you speak gently to me.

Please don't grieve; now I see.



Don't love me, not I.

You may plea, then wish to die.



Stare me in the soul, take my hand.

I must pay the toll, this isn't what I planned.



See you sobbing, you sit and stare.

Your hed throbbing, why do you care?



I shall mean nothing to you, not anymore.

My love is for two, I am just a chore.



To you only, I know its right.

Don't feel lonely, hold someone tight.



Just not me, I won't go on.

I shall fade a memory, my path has been drawn.



(Your name), I am sorry.hey! don't be harsh on her and call her clingy

she's just trying to say I'm sorry and chose the wrong poem

from what I see she doesn't really mean much to you, the friendship relation between you isn't really deep, she's done something stupid, she regrets what she's done, and now she's trying to fix it

so here's what.. I don't say that you should treat her as your best friend, but just forgive her and that's it .. no one is perfect
Emotional. You are good. I hope you join the poetry castle



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It's a website where you can post your poems, get and give feedback, join online poetry battles, meet other writers, become a part of a great community, join poetry exercise forums, and discussions. You'll love it there. Invite a friend to join with u if you want.
I would think you were a whiny passive aggressive girl and I'd look for new friends who didn't play your type of games.
It makes me think of the saying: It's not you, it's me.

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