What will this girl think If I send her this poem?

-Let me preface this by saying this is a poem I wrote one night a few weeks after the girl that I love told me she is moving away. She stopped communicating with me after she told me. I'm not sure if she is seeing someone else but it doesn't really matter, I've come to terms with the fact that I'll probably never see her again.



Hopefully some people can give me feedback, such as, whether or not it's any good, or if I should actually send it to her.





Never will I forget the cafe where we first met,

The log in the park where we first kept,

The seat on the bench where we first dreamt.



Never will I forget your first message; that you weren't repelled was

a tribute to our presage.



Never will I forget the time I first called , sexy was the tone and your Psyche was enthralled.



Never will I forget the humor and the quirks

or your stories of several jerks.



Never will I forget our first little smooch, you got too excited, thankfully I wasn't a douche.



Never will I forget that crazy girl who thought that her life was in danger, lo she had her goods examined by a stranger!



Never will I forget your classy and refined shirt, only to reveal a sexy little skirt.



Never will I forget when you would text or call, in the middle of your commute, you minded not at all.



Never will I forget that I pressed you to the wall,

passion, lust, and all- your resistance did not fall.



Never will I forget the dreams of you in the sack

nor your gorgeous beautiful rack!



Never will I forget that hole in your face, I didn't quite finish to repair it, so it stays in place.



Never will I forget how much you love my scruffy beard, that many a girl looked at and feared.



Never will I forget your beautiful hair, dark as a raven's, I stroked it because I care.



There's a few more lines but those are private.Great poem bro... And yes I wuld send it to her and instead of puttin "iwill never forget" try " remember" and at the end put "I remember and I will never forget"
Dude

Mano-a-mano

It sucks



You'd be better off just writing a letter saying how you feel.
~I love your poem, although I do feel that you to remove this verse: Never will I forget the dreams of you in the sack nor your gorgeous beautiful rack!



I think that verse ruins the overall fact that you are expressing all of the fond memories that you shared together.



I write poems as well and its just my opinion. Good luck and good writing...