What do you think of my Poem? Could you please comment?

-I'll be one deep forever- forever I'll be one deep,

I have no friends when im awake no wife when im asleep,

the statements that I put in ink are undoubtedly true,

I wish for things to be different and hope for heaven too,

I wonder why I was born- dont understand it at all,

im sitting by the phone waiting for Jesus Christ to call,

I smile when I think of leaving this earthly shell behind,

im sad when I think of this world 'cause it's no home of mine,

destined to be alone nobody really hears my tone,

I understand its all in vain thats why my tears are shown,

although I don't want me to live -- it seems that God does,

and so I keep on struggling although its a constant trudge,

never had anyone to love well acquainted with sorrow,

I pray for transition but things will be the same tomorrow,

heres hoping I lay down tonight and never get back up,

its getting old and to the point where enough is enough.I think this is the best one you've put up. I noticed that there were some lines similar to (or the same as) ones in your other poems. I don't think this is anything particularly special (but then again, you didn't like my one so maybe we just have a difference in taste). I will continue to read what you put up (if for no other reason than to keep an eye on my competition, jokes). On that note you should look at the one I just put up.
Its absolutely sublime ! Well done :D