What could i add to this poem?

-time to close the book on another great friend

i cant believe that this is the end

im sorry for ever hurting you

like tripping you over with my shoe

you were an amazing friends to me

but now its time for me to flee

maybe one day there will be a way to forgive and forget.



its for a friend who i dont want to be friends with anymore after yearsI think it's great as it is... it's short but describes with true words how you feel and what you're talking about, you don't really need to add anything else :)



Hope I helped :)I think that it is pretty good, except I'm pretty sure 'friends' is supposed to be 'friend' but thats no biggy. I would just like to know, did you literally ever trip her over with your shoe? Because unless you have, I would suggest possibly changing that sentence around.



Also, I just wanted to ask, is everything THAT bad that it has to come to the splitting of a friendship? I mean it is a bit harsh, and it has happened to me before and its sad and a horrible, so is it really that bad? I'm sure you would have thought about that though before writing this, so all I have to say is good luck!



Hope I helped