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2011年8月3日星期三

Read this poem please?

-My cousin wrote this. I found it adorable 'cause she's only in second grade, but I want your opinion.



I love my little dog a lot

Although she is a melting pot

Of various ticks and fleas.



She described that "melting pot" meant a "boom town". she learned it during second grade.witty poem. keep writing



If you like writing poetry, you should check out the Poetry Castle-- http://www.fliprap.com/forumdisplay.php?鈥?/a>



It's a website where you can post your poems, get and give feedback, join online poetry battles, meet other writers, become a part of a great community, join poetry exercise forums, and discussions. You'll love it there. Invite a friend to join with u if you want.awee its adorable

it also sounds similar to a haiku

and i am quite surprised she is in second grade



please answer mine

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;鈥?/a>
Sorry makes no sense to me

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