-My cousin wrote this. I found it adorable 'cause she's only in second grade, but I want your opinion.
I love my little dog a lot
Although she is a melting pot
Of various ticks and fleas.
She described that "melting pot" meant a "boom town". she learned it during second grade.witty poem. keep writing
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It's a website where you can post your poems, get and give feedback, join online poetry battles, meet other writers, become a part of a great community, join poetry exercise forums, and discussions. You'll love it there. Invite a friend to join with u if you want.awee its adorable
it also sounds similar to a haiku
and i am quite surprised she is in second grade
please answer mine
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Sorry makes no sense to me
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