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2011年8月4日星期四

Random poem please comment! :)?

-You silly thing

spitting sarcasm

on my face -

corroding

fresh cuts

of humor

on flushed cheeks,

the suddenness

of this banter

how unprepared

i stand,

witty comebacks

sadly

not at hand.Oh, I hate being in that situation!

I admire your succinct words. I like your line breaks - with such few words you have conveyed that situation of chagrin and defeat.

But you know what - it is usually those sarcastic people who are smaller in spirit. In the long run - it shows itself.

Better to be big and generous of spirit. You are and that is the much better path.

There are two words however I hold in reserve for dire situations. One starts with an F and one starts with a Y. Sometimes you just have to bust 'em out. I also like to add the word "twice" after I have said these two words. Just in dire circumstances, mind you. Most of the time I am civilized. Oh - sorry about my mulltiple els. I am having a problem with it.

Smille to you! Cheer up!Some people enjoy showing sarcasm and mockery... unfortunately... Nice realistic poem!
don't really understand what it's about.
funny. I like it

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