-You silly thing
spitting sarcasm
on my face -
corroding
fresh cuts
of humor
on flushed cheeks,
the suddenness
of this banter
how unprepared
i stand,
witty comebacks
sadly
not at hand.Oh, I hate being in that situation!
I admire your succinct words. I like your line breaks - with such few words you have conveyed that situation of chagrin and defeat.
But you know what - it is usually those sarcastic people who are smaller in spirit. In the long run - it shows itself.
Better to be big and generous of spirit. You are and that is the much better path.
There are two words however I hold in reserve for dire situations. One starts with an F and one starts with a Y. Sometimes you just have to bust 'em out. I also like to add the word "twice" after I have said these two words. Just in dire circumstances, mind you. Most of the time I am civilized. Oh - sorry about my mulltiple els. I am having a problem with it.
Smille to you! Cheer up!Some people enjoy showing sarcasm and mockery... unfortunately... Nice realistic poem!
don't really understand what it's about.
funny. I like it
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