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2011年8月3日星期三

Is this a good poem???????

-Roses are red , violets are blue , no one knew how much i loved you , but now your gone , and i am lost , so now i cry every day from dawn till dusk , as i yawn i remeber your the only man i could ever trust , so if you must , leave me here , smiling from ear to ear as you watch me shed my last tearWith Tori's formatting, I think it is quite good.

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