Is this a good poem.....??????????????????????????

-A jungle of concrete, full of wondering people, going somewhere ending nowhere in the concrete city. Grass gone, trees missing, footpaths take their place, in the concrete city.

cars and trucks, no quite sounds, no singing birds no silence in the concrete city.

No children play, no space for that, trapped inside the walls in the concrete city.

A jungle of concrete, full of wondering people, going somewhere ending nowhere in the concrete city.I love it, the setting of the poem paints pictures in my head word by word. I am a upconing rapper, so i do no somewhat in words. I would give this a 8-9/10



PLEASE ANSWER MINE, ITS ABOUT RAP/ POETRY



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Yes, i like it a lot. Is it about how life/nature is being torn apart? (may have gotten the wrong message)
I love it, i can easily picture the poem in my head. :)
it doesnt look like one but does that matter its got some good feelings