Another poem for you guys ?

-...there's not much meaning to this, i don't think...



to make the bad, good

to make the good, bad

to focuse the sidetracked

to sidetrack the focused

to loosen the tensed

to tense the loosened

to wobble the steady

to steady the wobbled

to heal the crippled, for i was one

to be a helping hand, for i had none

to be a teacher, although i'm too young

to be an inspiration, for i am not so smart

to be a hero, for i am a warning

to be a good friend, for mine are bad

to change your facial expression, for mine is sad

to put you first, cause i'm used to last

so i write for you. i'm not needed, nor wanted, but i'm here,

for you...It's one of those pieces that almost make the reader turn away (perhaps bored) but then it starts to gel and then gets better and better. The ending is quite brilliant. One of the best I've read here today.Sounds like a great brainstorming process. I would think the second half could be focussed into a meaningful piece.