-Don't just say what your heart tells you too because it's not telling me nothing lol . Give me some good ideas please and detailedWrite a poem about unrequited love and use the imagery of a dying birch tree in the fall. Use a melancholy tone and make sure the voice of the speaker is frustrated. Make it a haiku
My advise: Poetry is not simple, if you wish to follow it at a college level, that is. It's difficult to write literature based on someone else's emotions and imagery because everyone has a set style and everyone has strengths and weaknesses. A poem like this would be simple for me because I am the one who designed it, however, it may be difficult for you because perhaps you haven't a clue what haiku means. My point: it's a better idea to stick with your own ideas than using someone else's.
Aha, not going to tell you "what your heart tells you to". But I am going to tell you that if you want to write a good poem you have to be able to figure out what to write it about by yourself. Otherwise it's not really completely yours, now is it?
Think, take a walk, read some other poems, look around you, watch people, close your eyes, listen to music... get some inspiration, it'll come to you sooner or later.
And good luck!
I began to warm and chill
To objects and their fields,
A ragged cup, a twisted mop
The face of Jesus in my soup
Those sinister dinner deals
The meal trolley's wicked wheels
A hooked bone rising from my food
And all things either good or ungood.
And the mercy seat is waiting
And I think my head is burning
And in a way I'm yearning
To be done with all this weighing of the truth.
An eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth
And anyway I told the truth
And I'm not afraid to die.
I hear stories from the chamber
Christ was born into a manger
And like some ragged stranger
He died upon the cross
Might I say it seems so fitting in its way
He was a carpenter by trade
Or at least that's what I'm told
My kill hand's tatooed E.V.I.L.
Across it's brother's fist
That filthy five!
They did nothing to challenge or resist.
In Heaven His throne is made of gold
The ark of his Testament is stowed
A throne from which I'm told
All history does unfold.
It's made of wood and wire
And my body is on fire
And God is never far away.
Into the mercy seat I climb
My head is shaved, my head is wired
And like a moth that tries
To enter the bright eye
I go shuffling out of life
Just to hide in death awhile
And anyway I never lied.
And the mercy seat is waiting
And I think my head is burning
And in a way I'm yearning
To be done with all this weighing of the truth.
An eye for an eye
And a tooth for a tooth
And anyway I told the truth
And I'm not afraid to die.
And the mercy seat is burning
And I think my head is glowing
And in a way I'm hoping
To be done with all this twisting of the truth.
An eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth
And anyway there was no proof
And I'm not afraid to die.
And the mercy seat is glowing
And I think my head is smoking
And in a way I'm hoping
To be done with all these looks of disbelief.
A life for a life and a truth for a truth
And I've got nothing left to lose
And I'm not afraid to die.
And the mercy seat is smoking
And I think my head is melting
And in a way that's helping
To be done with all this twisting of the truth.
An eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth
And anyway I told the truth
But I'm afraid I told a lie.
Not a monkey's bad breath..
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You could replace a travelling..motion..
Like a monkey running in the trees..
The sunlight and the ocean..but never the breeze..
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like a walk..
but its a energy level
like the wind
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How to bring myself to the airy light
The wind and the height
a couple of waves..in the air
then a drifting beam thru a staring -left to be landing
but not on the way
the path and the landing
only without all the caring
its space on a dime
silvery and clean
button and cloth--left beside a stream
now just a mention..in some dream
how far I have gone..by beam and by leave
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just thought that might work/
think of one of the worst experiences you ever had, now write about it
from the viewpoint of cat who has to only see your actions, don't tell us how you feel.
let us know if you do this, we want to see the results
the frst object you see?
Or
Your favourite place to visit
A smell you like
A word you find funny
Love
Person you like
A silly looking person/character
Animal
A poem coming from your idol's perspective. (how they feel when the crowd screams&grabs, presures, normal living, etc.)
If your hearts not telling you anything maybe its just not the time to write one or think about something that means alot to you (ex. friends, family)
A monkeys bad breathe
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