What do you think of this poem?

-I Walk Alone



The pressure grows,

Turning stronger,

Day by day.



I cannot do this,

Am unable,

To stand my ground,

All by myself.



By force,

Without choice,

I walk alone.I think that one is really good. Your poems are great at times.
Not bad
i dislike the 2nd line... it's not bad overall.



my fav. part is the last 3 lines.