Poem about Domestic Abuse - What do you think?

-Hey

So it's not finished yet and it's not that good

But what's your opinion anyways? :)



Once a day and once a night,

The man who shares his blight in spite,



Fight,

You play a knight,

Deceiving to the innocent's sight,



My death warrant you write it,

Sign it and seal it,

Reveal it,

Your heart made of Ironite,

You're my ******* kryptonite,

Bleed it,

Breathe it,

Your tongue; you've never bitten it,

My day; you never brighten it,

You made your bed so sleep in it,



The boat you keel it,

Free it,

Free your hatred somewhere else,

Who can love the man who kills?



Even when the heat does still,

My heart no longer fills,

There is no love and only hate,

You chose your fate,

You chose your fate,



Paranoid,

Stupid boy,

Just 'cause she's the perfect puppet toy,



Daddy's girl,

You make my toes curl,

That rock you hurl,

**** you, girl



But still,

My heart it doesn't fill,

I only ever want to kill,



Blood,

I feel it bead in tiny buds,

Blood,

Blood,

I want the floor to flood,



Sad,

Bad,

You're the one who's mad,

You're not my Dad,

You're undeserving,

You say she's starving,

The presence of you; it's so unnerving,



Biased,

Liars,

Only after your own desires,

Pliers,

Your hands chopped off with the rusty pliers,

Wires,

Electrocuted when hands touch wires,



I want you dead,

Daddy's girl to find you in your bed,

Not even breathing,

Just please be leaving,



You're evil,

Just plain deceitful,

She gave me a mouthful,

A fistful,



Your existence makes it risk-full,

All yours words are bull,

I always feel like a fool,

Hopeful,

Never hopeful,

Until you die,

I won't be hopeful,



In the end though,

It wasn't enough,

Even after I burned all of your stuff,

My stomach churned,

Into you; everything turned,



I hope you burn; I hope you rot,

After all of the hatred you showed and taught,

I scream a lot,

There is no one to tame these thoughts,

My worst nightmare,

Created to scare,

Tear,

Tear me apart,

And I stare,

Into your darkened lair,

I don't want to become you,

If I do; that day I'll rueI think you should get this published, it's amazing! :DI think is good. : )