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-My Love



you're my pain,

my torture

ripping through

my heart.



don't turn away

pain,

refuse to forget

torture.

Only ever sufferWrite it regret it, say it forget it. I've written worse, but I was most likely under the influence of things that I can't put on the internet. That being said, I've only written a few that were terrible...and I think all my stuff is absolutely horrid.
Good start.



I can feel the emotional stress



Keep working on it. Try different words and rhythms.
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