Is this poem I wrote any good?

-Please tell me what you think of it even if you don't like it. Be honest, I can handle the truth. I also still need a title for it. So if you have any good ideas please share.





When I look up to the sky

I see His perfect creation

How can God design such beauty

And yet have made me too



I look up to the sky and know

I can never compare

To the wonder of His universe

To the beauty of His stars



Sometimes, though, I look to the sky

And feel His love around me

For He allowed my imperfection

To exist in His perfect worldSimple and clean. I want to see you in the Poetry Castle



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Not bad, but why are you so hard on yourself?
I really love it! It's nice to see a partially religous poem where they're not trying to shove their beliefs down your throat. It's lovely!