How is this poem? Where will you place it from 0-9?

-786 鈥?7 July 2011 鈥?Zahid from Pakistan



MY NEW EMULATOR



O cruel and faulty girl!

Take the soft copy of my love

Take it to your new beloved

Print it out and read my love



Read the pain you served

Read the torture I bore

You will know the depth

The sufferings in the pit of hell



That I typed in my heart

But could not print them out

Could not show them to you

Before you elected my emulatoryea, prolly 3. could be better





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Hi. Your poem is very touching and sad,, some strong words and emotions. you are very sad nad you give th imppression .
It sounds rather cruel and angry.
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Nicely written covering good thoughts. I would like to give you 6/9.



Keep it up :)
Pay no attention to those who score this low, I know your potry and the depths from whence it came. I give you a ;9;