Can you please honestly rate my songwriting skills? Aspiring songwriter! Need opinions!?

-No kings, Only Me is the songs name. Rate out of 10 with 10 being the BEST! Enjoy :)



Not thinking who i am

Wearing whatever i want

Anything goes on whatever i find

Who cares nows my time to shine



I dont care what you have to say

gonna be who i was always before

Never will you speak up for me

Ill always be me thats for sure



Nope im not trendy

Proudly away from the crowd

I dont dress all preppy

Im just living in the future tense forward



Glam kings on unicorn motorcycles

Im sure this wont pass your fashion trials

Who the damn cares what goes now days

Yesterday was just another day like today

But when tomorrow comes the cycles done

The trials are destroyed and the fun's to begin



I dont care what you have to say

gonna be who i was always before

Never will you speak up for me

Ill always be me thats for sure



Nope im not trendy

Proudly away from the crowd

I dont dress all preppy

Im just living in the future tense forward



I don't wanna copy what he wears

In all honesty whats his i don't care

I'm not a follower

I'm a trendsetter

A fast forward thinker

Thinking about the future



Your like a king everyone wants to be

You got the swag you talk all slang

I speak proper with a clean tongue

Understand me or get a dictionary

With all your soldiers coming with a bang

There all trained to just be like you

Just like some wannabe dude

Only to you they listen because your the king



Nope im not trendy

Proudly away from the crowd

I dont dress all preppy

Im just living in the future tense forward



Fast forward to the future

changing minds and culture

Fast forward to the future

Dethroning the kings

Fast forward to the future

Being the king of kingsI'll give it a 7/10.



It's very repetitive.5.5, it was good, I just think your song needs more variety.