Can any suggest a title, and comment if you will please?

-Shades of Emerald, glanced

by a sudden storm passing, rise

Crystalline joy, leaves

reborn

A heated breeze follows

from the West plains, refreshes the potpourri released

A time of silence comes,

inhale.

Reverence felt, senses at attention

life nearly, but not quite yet

sweet enough

prevails

Cautious optimism

key words to hold

when knowing yet another

day.Two Souls for you to guard and hope for and protect.

I am not sur potpourri works for you. It is a very locale specific word.

Other than that small thing - A resounding poem with very intersting pauses and line breaks.

Love to you.



OOps - title help = Emerald G anced - one of my etters doesn't work - can you guess which one? Darn!!Your optimism must prevail over anything. A nice sea shore poem, emerald waters, I take it, you live close to the ocean, a lovely thing... A time of silence, tells me you do not have many other people, around you, looks nice also. I believe you describe a certain temporary condition/situation of yours, cautiously allowing to yourself to be optimistic, I am also optimistic, all will go well, and good souls care for you. A very careful, attained poem. Bravo!



I would go for "Crystalline Joy". I love the phrase.
I like the use potpourri and feel it is more specific than fragrances, which could be anything but not the scent that comes to mind with the proper word. I have dishes of potpourri around my house, I think a lot of people will relate specifically to that.



Emerald eyes is such a beautiful description.



It's a beautiful poem. The mother waits, senses the growing life inside her and "reverence felt, senses at attention" because she knows the time is near.



Titles:

Coming

Soon

Waiting

Optimism



Congratulations, Earth Mother, may another life fill your arms soon.

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Hi. Title Another Day . Nice poem , Very meaningful i like how your poem sum up, bringing the message home. I like it.